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怎样写好求职信
高考书面表达
假定你是李华,将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业,你从报纸上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘书,你很感兴趣。请***写一封求职信,包括下列要点:
年龄;
学习情况及英语水平;
兴趣和特长;
性格特点。
注意: 1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
审题:
第一步,确定文体,这是一封求职信,目的是向对方推荐自己
第二步, 确定人称和时态,
第三步, 根据文字提示,确定主要内容要点。
本文应该用一般现在时,第一人称。
求职信或自荐信模版
求职信一般包括下列三个部分:
1. 说明应聘职位;
2. 介绍自身情况;
3. 请求回复并表示感谢。
求职信常见开头
I have learned from your advertisement that you need ________________. I’m writing to apply for the job.
an English secretary
列出要点:
1. 年龄:
2.学习情况及英语水平:
3.兴趣和特长;
4. 性格特点。
I’m 18 years old and _____________from Xinxing Foreign Language School this July.
will be graduating
错误表达:My study is very well. / My English level is very high.
正确表达:
I am an excellent student / a top student
I am an average student but I work hard (张某某)
1.My strengths lie in English and computers.
2. My best subjects are English and computers.
3. I do very well in English and computer classes.
4. English and computers are my areas of expertise.【专门知识;专门技能】
5. I'd say I am quite proficient at English and computers
1. I like / love playing guitar best.
2. In my spare time, I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps.
3. I'm interested in collecting stamps.
4. I'm really fond of skating in winter.
5. My favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.
6. I adore listening to popular music.
7. I'm crazy about sports.
8. I find great pleasure in listening to pop music.
9. I like nothing better than swimming.
confident, modest, brave, cheerful, kind, friendly, generous, honest, independent, reliable, patient, outgoing, sensitive, decisive, ambitious, punctual, sociable, easygoing, gentle, thoughtful, understanding, optimistic, frank, straightforward
I am outgoing, so I get along well with everyone(张某某)
I can assist the boss to finish work. (张某某)
If I gain the chance, I bear responsibility for the work.(任某某)
求职信常见结尾句型
I would appreciate the previlege of an interview. I may be reached by telephone at..., by e-mail at...
I would be glad to have a personal interview .
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to talking with you.
I would welcome the opportunity for a personal interview with you at your convenience.
求职信模版:
I am extremely pleased to see your advertisement for ______________ in _______________ And I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising.
I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, _____________________ On the other hand, ____________________. My ability to__________is out of question. I am____________(性格优势). If I’m lucky enough to have the opportunity to work in ____________, I would _____________________
I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume. Please contact me on ________(电话
) or e-mail me at ___________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
an English secretay
the newspaper
I am good at English and computer
I have some work experience
take the job
outgoing and patient
B&B Company
try my best to make a difference
例文批阅
2011年高考辽宁卷
假定你是李华,将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘书,你很感兴趣。请***写一封求职信,包括下列要点:
1. 年龄;
2. 学习情况及英语水平;
3. 兴趣和特长;
4. 性格特点。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary.
_______________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
认真推敲中档作文,看看得分点,失分点在哪里,再对照一下满分作文
中档作文(王某某)
Dear Sir/Madam,
I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. I am very interested in this job.
I’m 22 years old. I’ll graduate from Xinxing English collage in July. English is my favorite subject and I am good at English. In the collage, I learn every hard at English. So I always get a high score, and my teachers think highly of me.
I’m interested in computer, and I take an amateur course at collage to update my skills. (I am thought to be sociable.) I can communicate with every type of person. I think this is uncessary for good English secretary.
I am a easy-going girl. I can get along with people very well. On the other hand, careful is my biggest characteristic.
I think I am very suit with this job. I’m looking forward to your reply.
college
college
necessary
an
carefulness
fit for
得分点
1. 此文整体格式正确,时态人称正确。
2. 主要的内容要点没有缺漏,所用词汇、句子基本正确,行文基本流畅。
3. 作者使用了一些较高级的词汇,如take an amateur course , update my skills
失分点
1. 第二段略显Up嗦,用词不够简练,容易超字数。
2. 文中出现了一些常见大错。如形容词直 接作主语
3. 拼写错误
范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. I’m really interested in this position and hope I can work for you.
I’m 18 years old and will be graduating from Xinxing Foreign Language School this July. I’m an excellent student,among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. I’m good at English, especially spoken English. I often use the computer and I type very fast. In my spare time, I read a lot. Poems are my favorite. I enjoy music very much too. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides, I’m easy to get along with and I like to make friends.
I’m looking forwardto your reply.
Li Hua
写作练习
某中外合资企业在一家英文报上登了一则广告(advertisement),招聘一名秘书,基本条件如下:
1、年龄不超过25岁,未婚;
2、身体健康.身高要求:男性1.70米以上,女性1.60米以上;
3、高中以上文化程度;
4、有较好的英语基础,英语口语能力强者优先录用;
5、擅长写作,具有从事文秘(secretary)工作的能力。
假如你叫王强,看了广告后想求此职。请用英语写一封求职信,针对招聘条件介绍自己的情况。
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