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教学设计

滦南一中：满晓英

教学目标：improve our writing

教学目的：How to improve our writing

教学过程：

定义：“英语写作能力”就是学生综合运用英语进行书面交际的一种英语“书面表达”包含两方面内容：一是“书面”；二是“表达”。书面是指字母、单词、句子、段落及文章的书写规范（字母写法，占格位置，倾斜度 、大小比例，字间距等）；“表达”是指文章语言表达的正确、得当和规范、内容及结构的完整。

1.认真审题,明确写作目的和文体要求。

2.理清内容要点,确定写作顺序。

3.依据要点,写出提纲。

4.选择熟悉句型和用语组织（10-12个）

句子,切忌直译,完成草稿。

5.校对细节,检查语句和措辞,在草稿纸上完成所有改动。

6.将定稿誊写到试卷上,不再作任何改动

影响高考英语书面表达得分的

几个因素

1.语篇信息是否完整，

语言是否得体。

2.行文是否连贯流畅

3.是否使用高级词汇

4.是否使用复杂句

5.卷面整洁,书写工整

the main content of this period

亮点点拨

A、运用高级词汇或短语

B、灵活运用各种句型

C、注意衔接与连贯

词汇的选择

灵活新颖，出奇制胜

1)强调句

(原文) The dog has saved my little sister bravely.

修正) It is the dog that has saved my little sister bravely.

(原文) He did not know what had happened

until he had read the news in the newspaper

(修正) It was not until he had read the news

in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.

主从复合句

(原文) I won’t believe what he says.

(原文） The girl is spoken highly of.

Her composition was well written.

(修改）The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.

2)主从复合句

(原文) I won’t believe what he says.

(修正) ， I won’t believe.

（原文） The girl is spoken highly of.

Her composition was well written.

（修改）The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.

(3)分词短语、由with或without引导的短语

(原文) The driver escaped and didn't stop; he left the old man lying on the road.

(修正) The driver escaped without stopping, leaving the old man lying on the road.

(原文) If weather permits ,I will come

tomorrow.

(修正) Weather permitting, I will come tomorrow .

(4)倒装句

(原文) He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.

(修正) No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.

（原文） We can only do this in order to get good marks.

(修正) Only in this way, can we get

good marks.

(5)省略句

(原文) While you are crossing the street, you should be careful.

(修正) While crossing the street, you should be careful.

(原文) Once it is seen, it can never be

forgotten.

(修正) Once seen, it can never be forgotten.

(6)被动句

（原文）We will hold the party on Saturday afternoon.

（修改）The party will be held on Saturday afternoon.

（原文） People suggest that the conference

be put off.

（修改） It is suggested that the conference

be put off.

（7）虚拟语气

（原文） I passed the physics exam because of your help.

（修改） I couldn’t have passed the physics exam but for your help.

C、注意衔接与连贯

1.意义上承上启下的连词：

What’s more, moreover,

at the same time,

then, besides,

in addition, furthermore

2.意义转折对比的连词：

however, nevertheless,

on one handXXXXX on the other (hand),

while ，InsteadXXXXX on the contrary,

in other words, otherwise XXXXX

3.时间或顺序：

first, next ，then, later,

after that, finallyXXXXX;

for one thingXXXXX for another (thing)

4.总结：

in general, generally speaking,

in a word, in short, after all,

in all, in brief

练习：Translate the following sentences:

潍坊位于**_*部。

潍坊的总面积1.59万平方公里。

潍坊的人口863万。

潍坊气候宜人。

潍坊春季风多雨少。

潍坊的年平均气温摄氏12.3度。

潍坊有着悠久的历史。

潍坊有富饶的矿产和水产资源。

潍坊是中国优秀旅游城市。

潍坊自1984年开始举办一年一度的国际风筝节。

1. Weifang is located in the middle of Shandong Peninsula.

2. Weifang covers an area of 15.9 thousand square kilometers.

3. Weifang has a population of 8.63 million.

4. Weifang has a pleasant climate.

5. Weifang has a windy spring with little rain.

6. The yearly average temperature of

Weifang is 12.3XXXXXC.

How to make it fluent?

1. Located in the middle of Shandong Peninsula, Weifang covers an area of 15.9 thousand square kilometers with a population of 8.63 million.

2.The climate here is pleasant , especially in spring when it is windy and has little rain.

3.The average temperature of Weifang is 12.3XXXXXC

4. As an outstanding tourist city with a long history in China, Weifang is rich in both mineral resources and seafood products.

5. Weifang has been the host city of the annual International Kite Flying Festival since 1984.

小结：

1. 整洁的卷面； -----气派门面

2. 丰富的词句； -----高档建材

3. 流畅的结构； ----- 合理布局

4. 独到的见解； ----- 金玉其内

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