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人教版高三写作指导
高级词汇和短语在写作中的应用
----好词妙用，与众不同
主讲人：刘某某
单位：**_*学
The usage of advanced words and phrases in writing
Which one is better?
（1）I’d like you to help me.
→I’d like you to do me a favor.（2016全国卷I）
（2）I should be free any time after school .
→I should be available any time after school.
（3）Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.
→ Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. （2016北京卷）
do me a favor
available
came up with
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
覆盖所有内容要点。
应用了较多的语法结构和高级词汇。
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
完全达到了预期的写作目的
高考作文评分细则：第五档(21-25分)
高级词汇
整理总结复习过的高级词汇和短语
教学生在写作中如何运用高级短语，提高书面表达的得分
教 学 目 标
1. 动词类
我真心的希望你仔细考虑我的建议（2015陕西卷
（1）I sincerely hope that you will consider
my suggestions.
= I sincerely hope that you will
__________________________________.
take my suggestions into consideration
=take XXXXX..into account
1. 动词类
我们都非常骄傲并且相信我们能为了一个更好的世界做更多。（ 2016北京）
We are very proud of ourselves and believe
that we can do more for a better world.
= We are very proud of ourselves and
____________________ （convince）that we can do more for a better world.
are firmly convinced
=hold the firm belief
1. 动词类
我们将竭尽全力帮助你，但你必须做好迎接各种困难的准备。（2014天津卷）
We will do our best to help you, but you must get prepared to meet all kinds of difficulties.
= We will ____________________________ to help you, XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
do everything in our power
= do what/whatever/all one can to do
头脑风暴
lie in =
learn XXXXXwell=
can’t do sth=
decide to do =
should =
认为XXXXX有重要性
think of sth=
be located in
have a good command of
have difficulty in doing
make up one’s mind to do
be supposed to do
attach great importance to
sth occurs to sb
小试牛刀
现在是时候了，我们应该重视保护儿童
（倡议信）
It is high time that we attached great importance to protecting young children.
2. 名词类
我们有各种选择，例如旅游拜访亲戚朋友. （2013 辽宁）
We have various choices, such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.
= We have _______________ choices, such as travelling and visitingXXXXXXXXXX.
a variety of
= a wide range of
头脑风暴
chance =
many=
3.much=
4. more and more people
=
4. most of =
opportunity
a great number of
an increasing number of people
the majority of
a large amount of
提分模板
小试牛刀
越来越多的女孩子喜欢他，并且买了好多他的照片.
An increasing number of
girls are fond of him,
and buy a variety of
his pictures.
3.形容词
我能把这份工作做好.
I can do the job well.
= ———————————————
I can be equal to the job.
=be fit for/be qualified to do
3.形容词
你应该参加各种各样的锻炼，我认为对你的成长有利.
You should take part in a variety of activities, which I think is beneficial to your growth.
= You should participate in a variety of activities, which I think _________________
your growth.
is of benefit to
be+adj （important/useful/beneficial/helpful）
= be of +n （importance/use/benefit/help）
头脑风暴
difficult=
like=
rich=
be busy with=
more and more important=
tired =
be bad for=
challenging
be fond of
abundant
be occupied with
increasingly important
exhausted; worn out
be harmful to=do harm to
小试牛刀
有些小孩对玩手机简直到了痴迷的程度，这对他们的眼睛非常有害.
Some children are too crazy about playing mobile phones, which is very harmful to their eyes.
4. 固定结构
When it comes to doing,XXXXX..
Suddenly=all of a sudden
in fact= as a matter of fact
with new year coming =with new year drawing near/approaching
as far as I know= as far as I’m concerned
话题写作
不可否认，不同的人对金钱有不同的看法.
（there is no denying that）
2.如果我有机会获得百万美元，我首先会留出一些钱上大学，然后捐赠大量的钱到抚养我长大的希望工程.
（set aside; donate; the Hope Project ）
3. 毫无疑问，良好的教育对一个人而言很重要.
4. 然而我喜欢冒险，在街上闲逛（take a chance, wander in the street ）
5. 现在，我已下定决心，努力学习，坚信自己会被名牌大学录取。
Let’s discuss
There is no denying that different people have different opinions on money. If I had the chance to get 1,000,000 dollars, I would first set aside some money for my college education. Then I would donate a large amount of money to the Hope Project where I was brought up. There is no doubt that a good education is of great importance to a person. However, I was fond of taking a chance and wandering in the street. Now I have made up my mind to study hard. I hold the firm belief that I will be admitted to a famous university.
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Homework
Finish the composition on your book on page 82
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